Sure you spent a considerable amount of time constructing that scene; researched
for that specific detail, and even used encyclopedia for that piece of information, but if it's making your novel impossible to fit in a 96-page book, you would need to press DEL whether you like it or not.
Here are some pointers on how to make your manuscript shorter:
- Delete dialogues, monologues and other details that are not that important.
- Apply SHOW vs. TELL Rules. If a scene/action/detail is of minimal significance to the story and can be narrated, do the latter to save space.
- Scenes where not one of the leads is present can be deleted, especially if it does not have direct effect on the story line.
- Amputate dead scenes.
- Remove 'chitchat' scenes.
- Shorten narratives.
- Simplify descriptions of places.
- Reduce the number of chapters. Instead of having the usual 10, reduce it to 8. Chapter headers occupy a great deal of space.
Important: Don’t get too
attached to your manuscript. Revise with your mind (preferably open at the time
you start this) and not with your heart.
Happy cropping!
Happy cropping!
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